Bethany,I can barely see these ! Please adjust the scans in Photoshop and repost.
Bethany,In the future, please separate these pages - It's difficult to see these close up and from a distance, they read as too tight.Your variety in poses is decent and your sense of proportion is solid. I would like to see you work less like an illustrator, though. Your contours are always complete and sometimes too rigid. You will get more gesture out of your subjects with a loose and confident line. There are, of course, times when slowing down the line to develop detail in the face, hands and feet are necessary - but I believe your best drawings are ones where you stay loose when blocking in the gesture and leaving some of the contour simple.